Intro
Every year, the American Society for Human Genetics runs an essay competition to celebrate DNA Day. The top three finishers share a two-thousand-dollar prize pool, and their teachers can receive grants for their classrooms.
The competition can be very fun as well, so long as you pick a topic you are genuinely interested in. The prompts are always interesting and relevant. Last year focused on the impact of artificial intelligence in healthcare (something I explore in my blog post on Claude's biotech offerings), and this year the topic focused on genetic therapies.
As someone who is super interested in cancer (not the constellation), I gravitated towards CAR-T cell therapy, an innovative form of cancer treatment involving modifying immune cells to recognize malignant cells. While I didn't win any prizes, my perspective on healthcare was genuinely changed by the research I did. I learned about the realities of financial toxicity and providing specialized treatments.
Now that it has been a few weeks since I submitted, I also have some advice for the future contestants reading this post, so you don't make the same mistakes I did.
My Essay
Works Cited
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Brudno, J. N., Maus, M. V., & Hinrichs, C. S. (2024). CAR T Cells and T-Cell Therapies for Cancer. JAMA, 332(22). https://doi.org/10.1001/jama.2024.19462
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Improvements
After reading the winning submissions and reflected on my writing. There are a few ways I would improve this essay if I had another chance. Here are the issues I identified:
More personalization, less facts
I am a very fact-driven person, and throughout the research I read, I found a lot of facts. I felt as if I needed to include each interesting statistic I found. I didn't realize that every sentence of information came at a cost, my unique voice. The winning essays blended in the personal experiences and perspectives of their writers, not just plain information. I crowded my essay with so much information and sources that I didn't have a chance to let my own experience and perspectives shine through.
Too many arguments
I covered the unequal access of specialists, financial toxicity, and problematic side effects of CAR-T cell therapy along with many other details. In retrospect, each topic got at most 4-5 sentences, which wasn't enough to flesh it out. The reader was left unsatisfied since the ideas felt incomplete. I would have just focused on one specific disadvantage rather than three.
Too specific
It was really hard to judge how specific I should be. As a scientific blog writer, I am not at all afraid to dive into the details of specific pathways and proteins, so I was predisposed to dive into technicalities. I was only able to find previous submissions from 2025. Unfortunately, last year's topic was about AI so the participants didn't delve into medical details, so they weren't a good reference to gauge how specific my details about the treatment should be. Now, I realize that specific domains and clinical trials aren't necessary.
